"The Kidnapping": FCE Writting Practice 2
In Language class with Andrea, we practice for FCE writing test.
After doing the pre-writing of a story we wrote one, the story had to:
When he found his seat on the plane, Sam recognized that person who was sitting in the seat next to him. Suddenly, all his memories of that kidnapping came back to his mind. He remembered a well build man with green eyes and light skin. He was Marcos! He was his business associate! Why did he do that? He woke up tied to a chair in the boss's office.
Before he could realize he was stopping the line, the people had already complained to the plane crew. He was sitting down when he noticed that his ex-friend was sitting next to him and was staring at him. Consequently, he said:
"Why?"
Two seconds before, Marcos had stared at his shoes, shy. On the contrary, now he was staring at his eyes. Now he could see his bright, good looking, and blue eyes.
"I tried to stop myself. I am mean, I know" He said
"I also know! You were not trying. I don't believe you" He said back.
Pre-writing
After doing the pre-writing of a story we wrote one, the story had to:
- Start with the sentence "When he found his seat on the plane, Sam recognized that person who was sitting in the seat next to him"
- Have 4 examples of Simple Past
- Have 4 examples of Past Continuous
- Have 2 examples of Past Perfect
- Have 3 examples of Direct Speech
- Have 6 examples of connectors(not: and, but, because, so)
- Have 7 examples of good descriptive adjectives
- Be between 150 and 180 words
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| Sam's kidnapping memories |
The Kidnapping
When he found his seat on the plane, Sam recognized that person who was sitting in the seat next to him. Suddenly, all his memories of that kidnapping came back to his mind. He remembered a well build man with green eyes and light skin. He was Marcos! He was his business associate! Why did he do that? He woke up tied to a chair in the boss's office.
Before he could realize he was stopping the line, the people had already complained to the plane crew. He was sitting down when he noticed that his ex-friend was sitting next to him and was staring at him. Consequently, he said:
"Why?"
Two seconds before, Marcos had stared at his shoes, shy. On the contrary, now he was staring at his eyes. Now he could see his bright, good looking, and blue eyes.
"I tried to stop myself. I am mean, I know" He said
"I also know! You were not trying. I don't believe you" He said back.
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